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Amistad Poetry

On Friday we were honored to hear the distinguished poet Elizabeth Alexander share her Amistad epic with us. (You can read it all in this article.) I thought she was wonderful and hope you did too!  As I told you already, I first got to know this remarkable poem when Natasha Trethewey was at Dalton a couple of years ago. After sharing some of it with us, she helped us create a persona poem using the following description of Margru (from one of the original profiles of the Amisated captives in John Barber’s book).

Margru

What I remember of home is this:

green – green mangoes, green snakes, green bananas:
brown – my mother, my father, myself, the tree
trunks, the brown earth, the color of my language,
Mende,
the only language I had
to describe these things.

Often I think of
how I came to be here:

my father pawning me, waving goodbye,
his face crumpled, tightened, looking
away from me.

I felt my captor’s white, cold hand
tighten around my wrist as if
he were a solid ghost taking me away.

Now I wish to see again
the green rice fields,
my father’s brown face,
clouds in the sky —
the only white things,

to hear someone speaking my language,
someone saying

Margru.

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Now I hope you will be inspired to create your own poems. Take a look at the Amistad captive profiles here. Perhaps you want to do a persona poem about one of them?  Or a found poem (taking words from another place as she did with  “Other Cargo”) ? Or something else?

Write your poem as you wish. Revise. Proofread. Show a teacher.

Then create a collage with your poem in it. Here are some from an earlier to give you an idea where to go. (Of course, I hope yours are completely unique and different!)

Finally, you will scan in your poem, post it on your blog, and I will put all the collages on the bulletin board outside the classroom!

Your Margru Post

Now that you’ve read Margu you are ready to write a post about the story. Hopefully you will spend some time thinking about this and writing about it. We hope when your blogs are public to write something about this on Ms. Edinger’s blog as she’s done before so that people from all over the world come to see what you have to say. (Keep in mind that your readers will not have read Ms. Edinger’s story as it is not yet published and only on a blog for you.)

1. To start, come up with a direction for your post. Here are some ideas, but you may have another one:

  • Respond to a particular part in the story.
  • Respond to the literary devices (similes, metaphors, etc.).
  • Respond to the various images used.
  • What in Margru’s story surprised you? What did you learn?
  • Comparison to your oral history? To Amistad Rising?
  • Some consider this a Cinderella story — if you think this and want to write about it, why?
  • Is there something more you want to know?

2. Once you have a direction begin with a good topic sentence, some examples, and end with a conclusion.  I expect a truly excellent paragraph with AT LEAST five sentences (a topic sentence, three in the middle at least, and a concluding one).  WE DO NOT WANT A SUMMARY.  The only place where you describe the story should be in your topic sentence. The rest will be a response/reflection/review of it.

3. Proofread as always.

4. Post!

As you can imagine, we are all eager to read these!