Monthly Archive for February, 2010

Haiti Response

For this Writing Skills class, we will be continuing our ongoing conversation about the earthquake disaster in Haiti.  We have talked as a group to learn about the earthquake and its impact on the people of Port-au-Prince and Haiti, and we have heard from Michele Viard about a school for girls that was heavily damaged.  Finally, as a class, you have come together to successfully raise money and awareness through an after school hot chocolate sale.  The next step will move this conversation online, where you will write a blog post about your reactions to this tragic event and the efforts in which you and the Dalton School have participated.

Please write a paragraph about Haiti, keeping these questions in mind:

What comments or reactions might you have to what you’ve learned?

What did you think of Sra. Viard’s presentation?

How does this disaster make you feel?  How has this impacted you?

What was it like to fund raise as a house?

What more do you think we can do to help the Haitian people?

Copy and paste the paragraph we have written together as the beginning of your post:

As you probably know, on January 12th, 2010, a 7.0 magnitude earthquake hit Port-au-Prince, Haiti’s capital. Haiti was already a poor country, so damage to a city that lacks technology and support is all the more devastating.  Additionally, the country is still recovering from landslides from a 2005 hurricane that flooded the town of Gonaives.  Now, Haitians must recover from both disasters.  Immediate needs include healthcare, money, food, water, shelter, and supplies. This has been difficult to provide since people were cut off from transportation and aide because docks and airports were reduced to rubble.  Fortunately, the whole world is coming together in support of disaster relief. Haitians are people who don’t have that much and really need our help now more than ever.

Amistad Poetry

The forced immigration of people from Africa has inspired many poets.

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One of these was Phillis Wheatley. She was born around 1753 in Africa (one source I’ve read said she was from Gambia and another said Senegal), taken captive and brought to the United States when she was around eight. Her mistress taught her and soon Phillis was writing and publishing poems of her own. Here is one in which she is reflecting on the experience of being taken captive in Africa and brought to America:

On Being Brought from Africa to America

‘TWAS mercy brought me from my Pagan land,
Tought me benighted soul to understand
That there’s a God, that there’s a Saviour too:
Once I redemption neither sought nor knew.
Some view our sable race with scornful eye,
“Their colour is a diabolic die.”
Remember, Christians, Negros, black Cain,
May be refin’d, and join th’ angelic train.

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Another was African-American poet James Monroe Whitefield who wrote the following poem a few years after the Amistad affair, in 1853.

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Moving into the twentieth century, here are a few excerpts from a very long poem, “Freedom’s Plow” by Langston Hughes.

… A long time ago, but not too long ago,
Ships came from across the sea
Bringing the Pilgrims and prayer-makers,
Adventurers and booty seekers,
Free men and indentured servants,
Slave men and slave masters, all new-
To a new world, America!

With billowing sails the galleons came
Bringing men and dreams, women and dreams.
In little bands together,
Heart reaching out to heart,
Hand reaching out to hand,
They began to build our land.
Some were free hands
Seeking a greater freedom,
Some were indentured hands
Hoping to find their freedom,
Some were slave hands
Guarding in their hearts the seed of freedom,
But the word was there always:
Freedom….

A long time ago,
An enslaved people heading toward freedom
Made up a song:
Keep Your Hand On The Plow! Hold On!
The plow plowed a new furrow
Across the field of history.
Into that furrow the freedom seed was dropped.
From that seed a tree grew, is growing, will ever grow.
That tree is for everybody,
For all America, for all the world.
May its branches spread and shelter grow
Until all races and all peoples know its shade.
KEEP YOUR HAND ON THE PLOW! HOLD ON!

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Last of all we are going to read several Amistad poems from Elizabeth Alexander’s collection America Sublime.  Last year this remarkable poet visited Dalton, a very exciting day indeed!   I first got to know her work when Natasha Trethewey was at Dalton a couple of years ago. After sharing some of the Amistad poems with us, she helped us create a persona poem using the following description of Margru (from one of the original profiles of the Amisated captives in John Barber’s book).

Margru

What I remember of home is this:

green – green mangoes, green snakes, green bananas:
brown – my mother, my father, myself, the tree
trunks, the brown earth, the color of my language,
Mende,
the only language I had
to describe these things.

Often I think of
how I came to be here:

my father pawning me, waving goodbye,
his face crumpled, tightened, looking
away from me.

I felt my captor’s white, cold hand
tighten around my wrist as if
he were a solid ghost taking me away.

Now I wish to see again
the green rice fields,
my father’s brown face,
clouds in the sky —
the only white things,

to hear someone speaking my language,
someone saying

Margru.

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Now I hope you will be inspired to create your own poems. Here are some one class did a couple of years ago.

Before you begin let’s just take a moment to go over some poetic points to help you as you.   Ms. McQuillan and I will start:

  • Often sentence fragments.
  • May or may not use punctuation
  • Generally intended to give an emotional response
  • Formatting is important
  • Use of language: alliteration,  similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, and other sorts of figurative language
  • Endings (repeating words, rhyming, etc.)
  • Beginnings (repeating words, acrostics, etc)
  • Other forms (shapes, etc)
  • Found poetry (using words from a primary source as in “Other Cargo”)

Take a look at the Amistad captive profiles here. Perhaps you want to do a persona poem about one of them?  Or a found poem (taking words from another place as she did with  “Other Cargo”) ? Or something else?

Write your poem as you wish. Revise. Proofread. Show a teacher.

Then create a collage with your poem in it. Here are some from an earlier to give you an idea where to go. (Of course, I hope yours are completely unique and different!)

Finally, you will scan in your poem, post it on your blog, and I will put all the collages on the bulletin board outside the classroom!

What is a Good Work of Historical Fiction?

We’ve been doing a lot of talking recently about historical fiction.  For example, you read my historical fiction version of Margru’s story. We’ve also read various picture books that are historical fiction, say Veronica Chambers’ Amistad Rising. The question is: what make these books good historical fiction?

You have all just read what I consider to be good works of historical fiction. For your next blog post you will be writing about why they are.  But in order to do so you need to first think about what elements are necessary for a work of historical fiction to be good. Below is a list that last year’s class made.  Let’s go over it to see where we agree, disagree, and where we might want to add to it.  (Our examples are from the book I’m reading aloud right now: ONE CRAZY SUMMER.)

RUBRIC FOR GOOD HISTORICAL FICTION

HISTORICAL ELEMENTS:

  • Includes authentic language (from the time/place) – might include some words in foreign language (Sisters and Brothers OCS)
  • references real places (Oakland, Brooklyn,  JFK/Idelwild)
  • references real people, (Huey Newton, C. Clay, MLK, Muhammad Ali, Malcolm X)
  • references authentic objects, belongings, clothing, etc. (Timex, doll, black berets. telephone booth, dimes, Boeing 727)
  • references specific dates, (1968)
  • includes quotation from person of the time  (”Off of the Pigs”)
  • authentic ways of daily life based on research  (calling collect on the telephone, Afro, go-go dancer outfits, teeshirt with white pigs)

FICTIONAL ELEMENTS:

  • includes description using several senses (visual)
  • might include a theme
  • uses poetic devices ex. alliteration
  • uses figurative language ex. metaphors, similes
  • includes a range of emotions
  • style – format (journal, letters, story)
  • point of view -first, second or third person “Stand here with me…”
  • has interesting plot development
  • includes great characters you care about
  • might include believable dialogue

I looked for specific examples from Amistad Rising to prove these points and then wrote the following paragraph using this information to explain just how and why Amistad Rising is a good work of historical fiction.

Veronica Chambers’ fictionalized telling of a true event in Amistad Rising is a fine example of historical fiction.  In this case, Chambers has mostly stuck with the facts, embellishing them with some imagined speeches and thoughts.  She begins the story very compellingly asking the reader to imagine him/herself back in 1839 when the story took place.  “Stand here with me on the shores of New London, Connecticut.  Feel the cool breezes on your face.  Feel the dirt on your feet; this land is far from ordinary.” (1) Her facts are carefully researched.  For example, she writes of John Quincy Adams defending the captives.  Her use of figurative language is excellent as in the following passage: “Savoring the word, he let it melt like sugar on his tongue.” (20)  For those interested in an introduction to the Amistad story, I would recommend this book.

So now, it is your turn.  Write a good post about the work of historical fiction you read.  It must have at least one paragraph, three reasons and examples, and a wrapping-up sentence.  Then read it over, revise as necessary, proofread (and spell check), and then when it feels ready — publish!

Your Post on Africa is My Home

Now that you’ve read Africa is My Home you are ready to write a post about the story. Hopefully you will spend some time thinking about this and writing about it. I can tell you I am very, very, very eager to read these!

1. To start, come up with a direction for your post. (You may well want to use some of the notes you have in your little booklet for this.) Here are some ideas, but you may have another one:

  • Respond to a particular part in the story.
  • Respond to the literary devices (similes, metaphors, etc.).
  • Respond to the various images used.
  • What in Margru’s story surprised you? What did you learn?
  • Comparison to your oral history? To Amistad Rising? Something else?
  • Some consider this a Cinderella story — if you think this and want to write about it, why?
  • Something that the editor, Sarah Ketchersid told you that struck a chord.
  • Is there something more you want to know?

2. Once you have a direction begin with a good topic sentence, at least five sentences in the middle, and end with a conclusion.  As I told you — NO SUMMARIES, please (as I know this story well already).  The only place where you describe the story should be in your topic sentence. The rest will be a response/reflection/review of it.

3. Proofread as always.

4. Post!

As I wrote above, I am very eager to read these!

Final Cindies

You will be ready to proofread your Cinderella story after:

  • Completed at least two drafts that Ms. Edinger responded to
  • Finished revising in response to Ms. Edinger’s and others’ comments (for example, you may have had your story critiqued by the class or Ms. McQuillan looked at it or someone else).

So your next-to-final step will be to PROOFREAD your story:

  • Print out a copy of your story.
  • Proofread with Ms. McQuillan’s checklist.
  • Make changes on computer.
  • Print out one more copy.
  • Place finished story in dropbox (in folder “Proofcopy for Ms. McQuillan”)
  • Turn in BOTH printed copies (the one you marked up and the one you changed) and the checklist to Ms. McQuillan for her to check.
  • Once Ms. McQuillan has okayed your work Mr. Andre will do one final copyedit for you.

Final Step:

  • Put story on your blog!  It is then PUBLISHED for the whole world to read!

Africa is My Home: The Story of Sarah Margru Kinson

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As part of our study of historical fiction, I read aloud Amistad Rising by Veronica Chambers with illustrations by Paul Lee. Now we are going to look at the Amistad story again through the eyes of one of its participants — Sarah Margru Kinson. The Amistad captives were mostly Mende, people who live in a part of Africa that is now in the country of Sierra Leone where I lived many years ago as a teacher for the Peace Corps.

Through Sarah Margru’s story, a story I’ve slightly fictionalized and told here (I will give you the username and password in class to access it), I hope you will have a deeper sense of forced immigration. So, here is what I want you to do:

As you read Margru’s story, write notes and responses in the chapbook I will give you on these things:

Literary Stuff Here you can jot down any words or that seem descriptive, poetic, or otherwise give a literary sense.

Historical Stuff
Here you can jot down words, phrases, and titles of images that are clearly from history. (Be sure to include the images as most are primary sources and you may want to use them later in your blog posts and project.)

Response
Here you need to write how the part you read made you feel, questions you may have, or anything else you want.

When you are done reading with all this you will be writing a reflective blog post and also doing a poetry project related to Margru’s story and the Amistad.

Your Reviews of Bound for Glory!

Today we very much hope that you will write a review of  Bound for Glory!, the Middle School musical you saw last Thursday.   It was a different play than some of the others you have seen, but we hope that now that Mr. Gallagher spoke to you that you have enough of an understanding to write a review.  Remember what he spoke about:

  • the themes of the play
  • the setting of the Dust Bowl
  • why he felt it was so important to do the play (knowing the person who wrote all those songs, especially “This Land is Your Land”)
  • how he compiled it (using Woody Gutherie’s songs and parts of John Steinbeck’s The Grapes of Wrath and Karen Hesse’s Into the Dust).
  • what songs you knew and the ones you didn’t
  • the way he cast it (three Woodies, for instance)
  • Mexican illegal immigrants and their deportations

When you write your review you might want to begin with a description of the play and some of what Mr. Gallagher spoke about. Then you might want to comment on elements you liked:  the characters, costumes, the staging, the lighting,  the video projections, and more. You might want to single out a particularly favorite bit — perhaps the deportation number, the scene with the bread, or something else.    Were there performers you thought were especially good — mentioned them and say why!

Since we would like to make your  blogs public soon, so be sure to proofread carefully (checking for punctuation, sense, capitals, and spelling). Make sure that you have a good topic sentence, some supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence, too.

Also, please include a link to The Dalton School so your readers can learn more about where you saw the play.

To help you, here is a list of characters:

  • Pete Seeger
  • Woody Guthrie (Act I)
  • Woody Guthrie (Act II)
  • Pa Guthrie
  • Ma Guthrie
  • Clara
  • Citizen
  • Banker
  • Farmer
  • Young Woody
  • Dust Bowl Ma
  • Dust Bowl Pa
  • Dust Bowl Daughter
  • Man on Train
  • Woman on Train
  • Hobo Brown
  • Hobo Girl
  • Schwartz
  • Steinbeck
  • Pa Joad
  • Ma Joad
  • Tom Joad
  • Rose O’ Shar’n
  • Tire Seller
  • Two Children
  • Big Bill
  • Mae
  • Al
  • Trucker
  • Ragged Man
  • Sheriff
  • Deputy
  • Mexican Lady
  • Mexican Girl
  • Angry Man
  • Zilphia Horton
  • Worker
  • Stewart Udall
  • Bob Dylan