Monthly Archive for January, 2009

Your Reviews of Oliver!

Today you are going to write about Oliver!, the Middle School musical you saw yesterday. Try to describe the play and write about what you enjoyed. Think about the characters, costumes, set design, singing, and dancing.

Your blogs might go public soon, so be sure to proofread carefully (checking for punctuation, sense, capitals, and spelling). Make sure that you have a good topic sentence, some supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence, too.

Since your blogs might be public soon, please include a link to The Dalton School so your readers can learn more about where you saw the play.

To help you remember, here is a list of characters:

  • Oliver
  • Mr. Bumble
  • Widow Corney
  • Noah Claypole
  • Mr. & Mrs. Sowerberry
  • Charlotte
  • Artful Dodger
  • Fagin
  • Nancy
  • Bet
  • Charlie Bates
  • Bill Sykes
  • Mrs. Bedwin
  • Mr. Brownlow
  • Dr. Grimwig
  • Old Sally
  • Old Lady
  • Rose Seller
  • Milkmaids
  • Strawberry Seller
  • Knife Grinder
  • Chairman
  • Dickie

Africa is My Home: The Story of Sarah Margru Kinson

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Today I read aloud Amistad Rising by Veronica Chambers with illustrations by Paul Lee and talked with you about this famous event. Now we are going to look at the Amistad story again through the eyes of one of its participants — Sarah Margru Kinson. The Amistad captives were mostly Mende, people who live in a part of Africa that is now in the country of Sierra Leone where I lived many years ago as a teacher for the Peace Corps.

Through Sarah Margru’s story, a story I’ve slightly fictionalized and told here (I will give you the username and password in class to access it), I hope you will have a deeper sense of forced immigration.  I also think you will learn something about the tricky experience of writing about a real event. Should I fictionalize it or should I make it true? The version you will read is one I did for one publisher, but now another one wants it, but in a dfferent form. And so I am currently revising the story  as nonfiction.  It is for Dianne Hess, the Scholastic editor who was here a few weeks ago. So not only will you be learning about Margru and the Amistad story, but something about what it is to write, rewrite, write, and rewrite again!

As you read Margru’s story, I want you to  write notes and responses in the chapbook I will give you. Consider the following for your notes:

Literary Stuff Here you can jot down any words or that seem descriptive, poetic, or otherwise give a literary sense.

Historical Stuff
Here you can jot down words, phrases, and titles of images that are clearly from history. (Be sure to include the images as most are primary sources and you may want to use them later in your blog posts and project.)

Response
Here you need to write how the part you read made you feel, questions you may have, or anything else you want.

When you are done reading with all this you will be writing a blog post and also doing a poetry project (using Elizabeth Alexander’s poems) related to Margru’s story and the Amistad.

Congratulations on Becoming Big Dalton Citizens!

Dear Edinger House,

I’m sad not to be here for today’s very special Big Dalton Citizenship Ceremony to hand out your certificates and help celebrate  So here’s the next best thing:  a little movie I made yesterday just for you!  Enjoy and see you on Tuesday!

Ms. Edinger


Olaudah Equiano

Today I told you about Olaudah Equiano who was around ten years old when he was kidnapped and sold into slavery. After many years and experiences (good, bad, and horrible), he was able to buy his freedom and eventually wrote his autobiography to let others know about the horrors of slavery. I then began reading aloud  The Kidnapped Prince, an adaptation of Olaudah’s autobiography for children by Ann Cameron.

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As I mentioned to you, there has been some debate as to whether or not Olaudah was born in Africa or not.  Check out this link for some reasons this could or could not be true.  The author of that website concludes,

The bottom line is that we just don’t know. As the above table shows, there is evidence on both sides of the debate. Just about the only thing we can say for certain is that, when he was younger, Equiano told people he was from Carolina, but when he was older, he told people he was from Africa. Whether you believe the younger Equiano or the older Equiano is entirely up to you…

Next I will show you a multimedia presentation of Olaudah’s description of life in Africa which consisted of images from my own time in Africa, other relevant images, maps, sound, and much more.

Your Inauguration Post

Now that you have seen your very first Presidential Inauguration what did you think? Not only was it your first, but it is probably one of the more important ones in recent history — our nation’s first African-American president!  For this first post you will begin working on it during Writing Skills with Ms. Kirsch and then finish on Friday during your blog period (second period) with Ms. Nickles and Ms. Kirsch. (I will be away at a convention that day and look forward to reading all you have to say!).

Please include links to some or all of these sites in your post to give your readers a chance to learn more about this historic day (you’ll learn how to add links on Friday!):

A Schedule of the Ceremony
President Obama’s Inaugural Address
Elizabeth Alexander’s Inaugural Poem
Letters to the President Elect on Edinger House Blog
Joint Congressional Committee on Inaugural Ceremonies
President Obama and Chief Justice Roberts Redo the Presidential Oath of Office

Witnessing History

On Tuesday we will all be witnesses to an historic event, the inauguration of America’s first African-American president.  And how amazing that this is taking place the day after we celebrate and honor one of our nation’s greatest heroes, the Reverend Martin Luther King, Jr.  As you know we are starting our study of Forced Immigration too — a consideration of those who came to America against their will from the continent of Africa.   All of these events seem to be coming together for us in a really unique and wonderful way.

Your Second Post

With Ms. Kirsch you worked on writing a good paragraph describing your immigration oral history book.Eventually people from all over the world will read these, but for now it will just be the others in our class. So today you will create a post based on this work. First Ms. Nickles will show you how to add images from your book (the cover and two pages used at our Oral History Celebration) into it and then you will type in the edited version of your oral history book paragraph. If you don’t finish during this period, do it during Lab.

Here are the steps for today:

1. First, save your oral history images to your eeePC

2. Start a new post and add those images to your post

3. Type your oral history paragraph into your post

4. Publish your post!

Your First Blog Post

Ready to write your first post?  I hope so.

So here is what you are going to do. First you are going to study one of last year’s student blogs.  (You will be assigned one randomly.) Some of the things you might want to consider are:

What did they write about?

What can you learn about blogging from this person’s blog?

What did they use besides words?

How often did they write?

What sort of comments did they get?

What is one of your favorite posts and why?

What did you learn from this person’s blog that will help you when you do your own?

After studying this blog, your job is to write a good paragraph (or more, if you like) describing this blog and telling what you learned from it. It should have that a good topic sentence, at least three additional sentences, and a great concluding sentence. Then you should check for punctuation, sense, capitals, and spelling (and also use the spell check). Don’t forget to preview it!

Here are your blog assignments:

Angel Island Poetry

Yesterday, in the video you saw about Angel Island, there was a brief mention of the poetry detainees wrote while there. Do you remember that they pointed it on the walls?  Well, today we are going to take a good look at some of the poetry.

First we are going to watch a video about the poems here.

Next we are going to look at a website, “The Poetry of Angel Island.”  There are four poems on it that you will be able to read and listen to.  After we take a look together as a class I will divide you into four groups, one for each poem.  Your job will be to study your poem, listen to it, see if you can really get the sense of it, what the writer was communicating. Then you are to take a piece of poster paper and present the poem on it. You may want to draw, to use collage, watercolors, or something else.  However you thnk you can best present the poem.  These posters will go outside the classroom so they need to be wonderful!