Edinger House

Things to keep in mind as you write your next post:

Scenes
Why did you decide to do one part of a chapter and not another? Go back and look at your favorite illustrator —all them had to make choices about what to illustrate. For example, John Tenniel doesn’t show her with the long neck in the clouds — maybe he thought it was too weird. But others do illustrate that part of the story.

Scripts
Write about revision. You must have shortened your scripts. I know (because I’ve worked with some of you) that you’ve had to make chances so that they worked better as comics. Some of you are updating things in the script, for example. How about Dinah coming down the rabbit hole in one case? (rc, is that yours by any chance?:)

Illustrations
Write about your characters. Some of you are doing some interesting things with the way you are illustrating — write about that! (Cheshire Cat as a rapper, for example.)