Comments for c17zt

Comment on Nebraska’s State Mammal: the White-tailed Deer by Ms. Kirsch

Ms. Kirsch — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 18:45:01 +0000

Very nicely done. Please watch out for homophone mistakes, such as they’re/there/their. Also, where is the rest of your work for Nebraska?

Comment on A Cinderella Story by c17am1

c17am1 — Mon, 25 May 2009 17:45:48 +0000

I also think there were lots of mistakes, but read it over, and do a spellcheck. Otherwise it was really good!

Comment on A Cinderella Story by c17pm

c17pm — Tue, 19 May 2009 17:08:08 +0000

Like c17ar says, there are spelling mistakes. I really like Pretzel’s little rhyme. It was cute.

Comment on Pilgrim Podcast by edinger

edinger — Sun, 17 May 2009 10:59:35 +0000

I enjoyed this tremendously (but see me because you didn’t do it as a podcast and I want to show you how to do that).

Comment on The Kentucky Derby by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Fri, 15 May 2009 16:27:52 +0000

Where is your second article?

Comment on The Kentucky Derby by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Fri, 15 May 2009 16:25:29 +0000

Looks great! I like how much specific detail you’ve included.

Comment on Kentucky State Facts and Symbols by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Fri, 15 May 2009 16:24:47 +0000

Remember to capitalize your proper nouns!

Comment on Things That Make “When You Reach Me” a Good Book by edinger

edinger — Sun, 03 May 2009 11:17:46 +0000

This is a short, but perfect post. I especially like the line, “The boy who punches Sal turns out to have a mysterious past – and future.” Very cool!

Comment on Things That Make “When You Reach Me” a Good Book by Andrea Vaughn

Andrea Vaughn — Fri, 01 May 2009 14:09:31 +0000

Hi! I am a librarian in Brooklyn and I also had the chance to read an advanced copy of When You Reach Me. I didn’t guess the ending at all! I liked how it comes together so quickly, though. It made the ending very exciting!

Comment on All Alice, All The Time! by edinger

edinger — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 11:58:24 +0000

Very nice first post — you covered a lot! Love the way you are working on writing more!