The Green Book
I just read a book called The Green Book. It is like the Pilgrims story but instead of going away on a boat they go away in a space ship. I will tell you how the two books are the same and how they are different.
The similarities of the Pilgrims and the Shines are that they both travel to unknown places, both travel in bad condition, and both had limited amounts of supplies.
The differences are that the Pilgrims go on a boat and the Shines go on a space ship, the Pilgrims travel for 66 days and the Shines travel for four years, the Pilgrims chose to leave and the Shines had to leave, and last Shine is in the future and the Pilgrims are in the past.
April 21st, 2009 at 8:20 am
This is a fine start, but your assignment was to write a paragraph arguing for similarities or differences, and what you’ve posted is a list. Please work on this post and email me when you’ve made the necessary changes.
May 4th, 2009 at 7:17 am
Thank you for making the changes! You still have some capitalization errors (Pilgrims and Shines are both proper nouns), but overall the post looks great. Nice work!
May 17th, 2009 at 5:04 pm
Thanks Ms. Kirsch. I made the corrections.