Comments for c17sp

Comment on Vermont by Ms. Kirsch

Ms. Kirsch — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 18:43:02 +0000

These are wonderful! You clearly did your research, and worked hard to write well-thought-out and well-written articles. Nice job!

Comment on Pilgrim Podcast by edinger

edinger — Sun, 17 May 2009 10:57:36 +0000

This is just wonderful — it shows just how much you know about the Pilgrims and I can’t wait to read your story (and I will remember that it is historical fiction)!

Comment on Virginia Article by jkirsch

jkirsch — Thu, 14 May 2009 15:36:10 +0000

You’ve done an excellent job! I love how you focused on really specific historical details about Virginia. Please be careful about capitalizing proper nouns, and you left a few of them in lowercase. Also, where is your fact sheet?

Comment on Things that are Confusing until the End (Spoiler) by edinger

edinger — Sun, 03 May 2009 11:21:59 +0000

Wow indeed. Your post really captures the excitement of this book. Terrific! (am1—I fixed the typo, thanks for noting it.) I hope many people read this terrific book!

Comment on Things that are Confusing until the End (Spoiler) by c17am1

c17am1 — Sat, 02 May 2009 00:01:48 +0000

I got the email and it linked to your post. It was really except friendship is spelled without a space. You spelled it friend ship. Otherwise it was good.

Comment on The Captive by Pops Giacchino

Pops Giacchino — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 04:14:06 +0000

Hello c17sp,
What a coincidence. Just a couple of days ago I visited the Constitution Center in Philadelphia. You remember when we saw the exhibit, “America, I Am”. One of the displays mentioned that Olaudah Equiano was important in getting England to stop the slave on British ships. The exhibit ends on May 3, so I don’t know if you can get to see it again. I am glad that you are making good use of the computer by blogging. Keep it up. I was also happy to hear that you are reading your ____ off.

Comment on Alice:1 by edinger

edinger — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 11:56:57 +0000

Great overview of what we’ve done so far. You are so far already with your comic and all ready to start with Comic Life, I know!

Comment on The Green book VS The Pilgrims by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 14:22:21 +0000

Very nice work! I especially like your very specific examples from both The Green Book and the Pilgrim experience. Good introduction and conclusion, as well! Be careful to pay attention to capitalization and punctuation (and homophones) but overall, very nice work!

Comment on The Man Who Saved Many by Mom

Mom — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 00:14:44 +0000

I can’t believe I hadn’t read your Cindy story until now. It is fabulous. Of course lots of war and mayhem–I wonder if that’s a first for a 4th grade Cindy story? It seems like you did a lot of work on this, you should be very happy with it.

Comment on The Green book VS The Pilgrims by Mom

Mom — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 00:07:11 +0000

I like the way you compared the two stories. I have never read The Green Book, but I do know about the Pilgrims. There are two words that you need to correct. They are spelled correctly, but you wrote the opposite homophone. See if you can find what they are.