The Green book VS The Pilgrims

The pilgrims were a bit similar to the people of shine. I mean they both had poor living conditions on the trip. Here is a different thing about them both. The Shine people came on a spaceship and the trip took 4 years and the Pilgrims came on a boat and it took 66 days. But when they both first came to there destination it was hard to live but they figured it out. There is a difference, later on the Native Americans helped the Pilgrims, the Moth People did not help the Shine people. But there is something else similar if it was not for the Candy Trees and the wheat the Shine people would die and The Pilgrims, if it was not for corn they would die to. But there is a difference after Sqanto showed The Pilgrims how to grow corn they had no problem but the Shine people had a lot of trouble with the wheat. There are tons of things that are the same and that are different but will not say all of them because there are tons.

2 Responses to “The Green book VS The Pilgrims”

  1. I like the way you compared the two stories. I have never read The Green Book, but I do know about the Pilgrims. There are two words that you need to correct. They are spelled correctly, but you wrote the opposite homophone. See if you can find what they are.

  2. Very nice work! I especially like your very specific examples from both The Green Book and the Pilgrim experience. Good introduction and conclusion, as well! Be careful to pay attention to capitalization and punctuation (and homophones) but overall, very nice work!

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