Comments for c17sh

Comment on Kansas by Ms. Kirsch

Ms. Kirsch — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 18:41:03 +0000

Nicely done! Watch your punctuation and run-on sentences!

Comment on Illinois by jkirsch

jkirsch — Thu, 14 May 2009 15:33:45 +0000

This is great! I loved reading about the history of the ice cream sundae! Who knew? Your article on Sue could use a few more sentences, but overall you’ve done a nice job.

Comment on When You Reach Me by c17ar

c17ar — Sun, 03 May 2009 11:25:39 +0000

Coool Poooost!

Comment on When You Reach Me by edinger

edinger — Sun, 03 May 2009 11:15:32 +0000

Looks like you already got one outside person eager to read this book. I especially like the way you noted it is both confusing and amazing. Perfect way to describe it.

Comment on When You Reach Me by Kathleen Armstrong

Kathleen Armstrong — Sat, 02 May 2009 14:08:00 +0000

I can’t wait to read this book to my class. We read A Wrinkle in Time in the spring, so we’ll wait awhile to read When You Reach Me. How lucky you are to read an advanced copy. It’s on my list for July. Your review makes me want to read it right away.

Comment on Where Did Alice Go? by edinger

edinger — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 11:56:10 +0000

Wow, what a fascinating first post! I think it is cool that you thought the book wasn’t known by your generation. It was fun to learn about, wasn’t it?

Comment on The Green Book by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 12:14:23 +0000

This is a great paragraph! I especially like how carefully you formatted your examples, starting with an introduction and ending with a concluding sentence. Well done! Be careful about capitalization — you should consistently capitalize the title of the book.

Comment on Mourts Relation by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 12:50:48 +0000

Will you post your drawing from Mourt’s so we can see it?

Comment on My Cinderella Story by c17ar

c17ar — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 23:56:12 +0000

I really like the concept of the prince always being right in fron of her nose. Good job.

Comment on My Cinderella Story by c17dw

c17dw — Tue, 10 Mar 2009 22:15:04 +0000

I thought you should the story more interesting and make the ending more Cinderellery because the Cindy charecter is supposed to marry the “Prince.”