Comments for c17nl

Comment on My Last Blog Post by maryam

maryam — Tue, 09 Jun 2009 14:14:44 +0000

there is always sadness at the end of a journey. its the end of fourth grade but the beginning of fifth. so the journey continues love that u have a blog. wish id had one when i was in fourth grade.

Comment on My Last Blog Post by c17nl

c17nl — Tue, 09 Jun 2009 13:23:01 +0000

Goodbye!

Comment on Buddy Interview by c17nl

c17nl — Fri, 22 May 2009 14:32:10 +0000

Don’t you love it?

Comment on Pilgrim Story Podcast by edinger

edinger — Sun, 17 May 2009 10:51:56 +0000

Fantastic! I loved that you mentioned that you were inspired to do letters after reading Letters from Rifka!!!!

Comment on Maine by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Fri, 15 May 2009 16:10:09 +0000

Great work! Watch out for proper nouns — names should always be capitalized.

Comment on Things That are Hard to Explain (Like this Book) by edinger

edinger — Sun, 03 May 2009 11:10:10 +0000

Excellent post. It was tricky, I know, to write, but you gave just the right amount of information without giving anything away. And you made readers all the more eager to read the book. Well done!

Comment on Learning about Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland by edinger

edinger — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 11:54:24 +0000

Terrific first post in this series. Very thorough. Hope you enjoyed what we’ve done so far!

Comment on The Green Book by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 13:49:32 +0000

This is a lovely paragraph, well written and formatted properly. However, you need to go back and do some editing. Things to look out for:
-run on sentences
-proper punctuation
-proper capitalization (Shine, The Green Book, Pilgrims, are all proper nouns and should begin with capital letters)
-there vs. their vs. they’re

Comment on Mourt’s Relation by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 12:55:34 +0000

Beautiful work!

Comment on Cindy Story by c17am1

c17am1 — Mon, 30 Mar 2009 21:18:03 +0000

I really liked your story. The ipod was really cool. You had one spelling mistake though, awe instead of aw, otherwise it was really good.