http://blogs.dalton.org/c17nl/2009/04/14/the-green-book/ Tue, 09 Jun 2009 14:14:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://blogs.dalton.org/c17nl/2009/04/14/the-green-book/comment-page-1/#comment-32 Ms.Kirsch Wed, 15 Apr 2009 13:49:32 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c17nl/?p=30#comment-32 This is a lovely paragraph, well written and formatted properly. However, you need to go back and do some editing. Things to look out for: -run on sentences -proper punctuation -proper capitalization (Shine, The Green Book, Pilgrims, are all proper nouns and should begin with capital letters) -there vs. their vs. they're This is a lovely paragraph, well written and formatted properly. However, you need to go back and do some editing. Things to look out for:
-run on sentences
-proper punctuation
-proper capitalization (Shine, The Green Book, Pilgrims, are all proper nouns and should begin with capital letters)
-there vs. their vs. they’re

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