The Green Book

I read The Green Book It’s about these people in the future and they have to leave the earth because someone is going to destroy it. So they have to go to another planet that no human has ever been to. It’s sort of like the Pilgrim journey and how they go to an unknown place. The people in the green book (the shine people) go to a different planet and when they got there they had never seen anything on the planet but with the Pilgrims they had seen grass and trees and nature before. The shine people traveled in a space ship for four years and the Pilgrims traveled in a ship (the Mayflower) for sixty six days. When both got to there new land they had a hard time. Getting food, building shelter, and just settling down. They both only could bring very few things. They shine people had more hight tec gear then the Pilgrims. They both had new friends in there new worlds. The Pilgrims had the Native Americans and the shine people had the moth people. The Pilgrims lost a couple of passengers and the shine people didn’t loose any. I think they both had similar times.

One Response to “The Green Book”

  1. This is a lovely paragraph, well written and formatted properly. However, you need to go back and do some editing. Things to look out for:
    -run on sentences
    -proper punctuation
    -proper capitalization (Shine, The Green Book, Pilgrims, are all proper nouns and should begin with capital letters)
    -there vs. their vs. they’re

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