Comments for c17jl

Comment on Tennessee and Johnny Cash by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Fri, 22 May 2009 13:54:54 +0000

This looks great! You’ve included lots of really nice details about Johnny Cash’s life and work. However, you have forgotten to use proper punctuation! Please go back to this post and look carefully at your capital letters (proper nouns, start of a new sentence), and spelling (Memphis, TN).

Comment on Things That make This a Good Book by edinger

edinger — Sun, 03 May 2009 11:08:07 +0000

You did an excellent job getting people to want to read this book without giving any of it away! I agree — five stars for sure!

Comment on All About ALICE (In Wonderland) by edinger

edinger — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 11:48:48 +0000

NIce first post — I get the sense that you are having a lot of fun with this. Great!

Comment on The Green Book VS. The Pilgrims by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 14:18:10 +0000

This is a good start — you have several comparisons ready to go. You need to do some editing, however, to catch your run on sentences, and punctuation/capitalization/spelling errors. Before you finish read over your post and make sure the paragraph makes sense!

Comment on All About ALICE (In Wonderland) by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 12:58:52 +0000

Sounds like fun! I look forward to seeing your finished product.

Comment on The Pilgrims and Mourts Relation by c17ap

c17ap — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 00:28:12 +0000

Awesome picture its so detailed.

Comment on My Cindy Story by c17pm

c17pm — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 17:48:55 +0000

I don’t really get the ending, and it has a lot of spelling mistakes but I like it a lot.

Comment on My Cindy Story by c17ap

c17ap — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 23:08:29 +0000

there are many spelling mistakes but I loved your cindi story. The end is a little unclear but I love it.

Comment on My Cindy Story by c17ar

c17ar — Fri, 13 Mar 2009 21:18:41 +0000

Interesting. By the way hi.

Comment on My Cindy Story by c17jl1

c17jl1 — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 23:51:43 +0000

I think that you did a great job c17jl. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes. I think that you should go back and check the spelling. Maybe run spellcheck.