The Green Book VS. The Pilgrims
Our teacher said we were going to have to read a book called The Green
Book. The book is about a group of people that have to leave earth because it is going to be destroyed. they go to a planet that has are and try to survive. we have to compare the people in the green books experience and the pilgrims experience, So I will show you some similarities and differences. so the first similarity is that they both had to leave their home land. the next similarity is that they both had to struggle to survive. And now some differences. The Pilgrims are in the past and the green book takes place in the future another difference is that the people in the green book travel in a nice space ship but the pilgrims travil in a smelly, dirty and crouded ship.
April 15th, 2009 at 9:18 am
This is a good start — you have several comparisons ready to go. You need to do some editing, however, to catch your run on sentences, and punctuation/capitalization/spelling errors. Before you finish read over your post and make sure the paragraph makes sense!