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Comment on Our Pilgrims by edinger

edinger — Sun, 17 May 2009 10:40:22 +0000

I enjoyed the podcast, but how about writing something in the post to explain this?

Comment on Indiana by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Fri, 15 May 2009 16:08:03 +0000

This is wonderful! Very well-written and interesting! My only suggestion is that you run the spellcheck, as there are a handful of misspellings in your post.

Comment on Things That are Mysterious by edinger

edinger — Sun, 03 May 2009 10:51:37 +0000

You did a lovely job letting readers know it is a wonderful book without giving anything away!

Comment on My Cindy Story by c17sp

c17sp — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 16:47:05 +0000

That was good but I think the unit members should be more mean to him.

Comment on Alice Post I by edinger

edinger — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 11:46:22 +0000

Love this first post in your Alice series. And I especially love that comment about how you each can “twist the txt to very far limits.” Go for it, I say!

Comment on The Green Book by c17sp

c17sp — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 14:41:46 +0000

Do you really think that they did not like there home. Just when they first came but it was better then there old home. Otherwise nice post

Comment on The Green Book by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 13:46:08 +0000

This is an excellent paragraph comparing The Green Book to the Pilgrim experience. However, you start with a big statement (The Pilgrims had it worse), but then don’t follow up with specific examples. I think you can convince your reader that you are right, but you need to add a few sentences explaining why you feel the way you do.

Comment on Alice Post I by Ms.Kirsch

Ms.Kirsch — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 13:03:47 +0000

Nicely written! I look forward to seeing your finished comic.

Comment on Mourt’s Relation by c17ap

c17ap — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 00:29:02 +0000

your ship looks a little like a animal but otherwise its cool

Comment on My Cindy Story by c17am1

c17am1 — Mon, 30 Mar 2009 20:34:54 +0000

Yours was a very different story than the others. It was still an interesting story.