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Comment on Things That Make “When You Reach Me” a Mysterious Book by Joann

Joann — Sat, 30 May 2009 14:55:19 +0000

I like mysteries. I like funny books. And I like books that make you think. So I want to read this one. Thanks for your review.

Comment on New York state facts by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Wed, 27 May 2009 19:11:00 +0000

These are great first drafts. I want you to look over your writing and keep an eye out for the following: run-on sentences, capitalization of proper nouns, and proper spelling. For example, Niagara is misspelled in your first article. Overall, the details are great and you should feel very good about the work you’ve done on this assignment!

Comment on pilgrim podcast by edinger

edinger — Sun, 17 May 2009 10:33:31 +0000

Nice! Gives an excellent taste of how well you know your character. Can’t wait to read the story itself!

Comment on About Delaware by c17ap

c17ap — Thu, 14 May 2009 22:46:22 +0000

I have finished

Comment on About Delaware by jkirsch

jkirsch — Thu, 14 May 2009 15:11:39 +0000

Looks great! A few reminders:
-capitalize proper nouns (names of flowers, animals, places etc.)
-use specific and meaningful language (the word ’stuff’ is not very descriptive!)
-proofread and spellcheck to catch your typos!

Comment on Things That Make “When You Reach Me” a Mysterious Book by edinger

edinger — Sun, 03 May 2009 10:47:35 +0000

You vividly gave others a sense of the experience of reading this book — it is one that keeps you on the edge of your seat!

Comment on All About Alice: number 1 by edinger

edinger — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 11:43:06 +0000

Love how you wrote about so much of what we did! I’m looking forward to your next post in which you tell us what you’ve been doing so far with the comic. (Watch out for those capitals, by the way:)

Comment on My Cindi Story by c17sp

c17sp — Mon, 13 Apr 2009 22:43:34 +0000

That story was like a Boss. That was really good I liked how the stuff turned him into a bird

Comment on Green Book compared to Pilgrims by Jennifer Kirsch

Jennifer Kirsch — Mon, 13 Apr 2009 13:48:59 +0000

Nicely done! I especially like your concluding sentence!

Comment on Green Book compared to Pilgrims by c17ap

c17ap — Thu, 09 Apr 2009 17:16:52 +0000

I have done it