Green Book compared to Pilgrims

I’ve read a book called The Green Book.  Its about people from earth that have to move to a different planet (they named Shine), and about how they live there.  This book is a lot like the pilgrims voyage so I’m comparing it with the pilgrims voyage I’m gonna show you some similarities, like they both travel to unknown lands-and have to figure out how to survive (growing crops, building shelter), they both have bad conditions at there new home, they both traveled on long journeys, they both had brought back-up food incase they needed it, they both had bad equipment/technology, neither of them had  a lot of money and lastly both of the groups brought a small number of personal items.  Here are some differences.  The pilgrims had a harder life (death, disease), the pilgrims were from the past and the green book people in the future, the pilgrims rode in a boat-green book people rode in a space ship, the pilgrims chose to leave and the people of shine (green book) had to, young children in shine played but pilgrim children worked all day, pilgrim voyage took 66 days-shine people took 4 years but they weren’t falling sick, the pilgrims took what they wanted/shine people took what they needed.  Thats pretty much all of the similarities and differences of the pilgrims and the people of shine.  But they both tried there best and never gave up and they became successful at the end.

3 Responses to “Green Book compared to Pilgrims”

  1. While you have made several important points, you will need to change this post so that it is a properly formatted paragraph, instead of the list you now have. You also need to do some proofreading, as there are several run-on sentences and missing apostrophes. Please email me when you have edited your post.

  2. I have done it

  3. Jennifer Kirsch Says:

    Nicely done! I especially like your concluding sentence!

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