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We have started our Alice comics, the ones I mentioned in the last All About Alice post. My partner for the comic is c16tk. We are doing two chapters combined. We had to worry about not being too talky, not taking too long scenes, etc. etc..This is what we’ve done so far. It’s the first four of 11 scenes for our comic.

1. “That’s the judge, because of his great wig.” AT
“And that’s the jury-box, and those 12 creatures, I suppose are the jurors.” AT
2. KS “Herald, read the accusation!” KS “Consider your verdict!” RS “Not yet, not yet! There’s a great deal to come before that!” KS “Call the first witness.” RS “First witness!”
3. HS “I beg pardon, your Majesty, for bringing these in: but I hadn’t quite finished my tea when I was sent for.” KS “You ought to have finished. When did you begin?” HS “Fourteenth of March, I think it was.” MHS “Fifteenth.” DS “Sixteenth.” KS “Take off your hat.” HS “It isn’t mine.” KS “Stolen!” HS “I keep them to sell. I’ve none of my own, I’m a hatter.”
4. GP1S “Yay!” (GP1Suppressed) AT “I’m glad I’ve seen that done, I’ve so often read in the newspapers, at the end of trials, “There was some attempt at applause, which was immediately suppressed by the officers of the court,” and I never understood what it meant.”

It’s hard to understand because we have it in a basic kind of “code”. That is the progress we have made so far. See you next time!