Comments on: Letters From Rifka http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/ Incredible Ideas from the Awesome M Sun, 04 May 2008 10:45:53 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: c16hh http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-24 c16hh Thu, 28 Feb 2008 18:07:53 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-24 I agree with K D I agree with K D

]]> By: c16kd http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-14 c16kd Fri, 01 Feb 2008 18:14:55 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-14 I truly don't think you need to really need to improve your writing that much. You are a very mature young lady. Like when you wrote "Letters from Rifka's intriguing story drew me straight to the book the second I saw it." True grown-up speach! Great discreptions and just need to be more age apporite. I truly don’t think you need to really need to improve your writing that much. You are a very mature young lady. Like when you wrote “Letters from Rifka’s intriguing story drew me straight to the book the second I saw it.” True grown-up speach! Great discreptions and just need to be more age apporite.

]]> By: c16hh http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-13 c16hh Fri, 01 Feb 2008 18:11:35 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-13 hey mm what up. OK I love your summary sort of thing but the pix (K D told me to write this) is way to much. I really like hm how to improve your writting dont use female immigrant sounds to boring don't put the pages numbers in brakets like (Page 6) it doesn't look good. well K D is bugging me write a comment -HH hey mm what up. OK I love your summary sort of thing but the pix (K D told me to write this) is way to much. I really like hm how to improve your writting dont use female immigrant sounds to boring don’t put the pages numbers in brakets like (Page 6) it doesn’t look good. well K D is bugging me write a comment

-HH

]]> By: c16mm http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-12 c16mm Fri, 01 Feb 2008 18:06:22 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-12 This is c16mm. This is c16mm.

]]> By: edinger http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-11 edinger Thu, 31 Jan 2008 10:26:19 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-11 hh, just checking --- are you complementing mm because she put the picture in? Figure you are, but want to be sure. hh, just checking — are you complementing mm because she put the picture in? Figure you are, but want to be sure.

]]> By: c16mm http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-9 c16mm Wed, 30 Jan 2008 21:43:50 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-9 Thanks Guys! Do you have any ideas on how I can improve my writing?! MSM Thanks Guys!
Do you have any ideas on how I can improve my writing?!
MSM

]]> By: c16hh http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-8 c16hh Tue, 29 Jan 2008 20:15:01 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-8 mm you are such a show off with the picture it looks great though. -hh mm you are such a show off with the picture it looks great though.

-hh

]]> By: c16kd http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-7 c16kd Tue, 29 Jan 2008 20:14:29 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-7 I like how you gave my more info then Karen Hesse did. Good examples!!!!! I really thought you told me what happened and love when people do that. Great blog! KD I like how you gave my more info then Karen Hesse did. Good examples!!!!! I really thought you told me what happened and love when people do that.

Great blog!

KD

]]> By: edinger http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-6 edinger Mon, 28 Jan 2008 20:20:21 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-6 Looks great now! Looks great now!

]]> By: edinger http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/comment-page-1/#comment-5 edinger Mon, 28 Jan 2008 10:22:25 +0000 http://blogs.dalton.org/c16mm/2008/01/27/letters-from-rifka/#comment-5 Some great examples of why Hesse did such a great job writing this book! One thought --- could you add a second sentence (after your summary of the book) giving us a sense of what you thought about the book as a work of historical fiction? You give us a nice concluding sentence, but one before you give us the examples would good too. Some great examples of why Hesse did such a great job writing this book! One thought — could you add a second sentence (after your summary of the book) giving us a sense of what you thought about the book as a work of historical fiction? You give us a nice concluding sentence, but one before you give us the examples would good too.

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