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Since my last post, I:

• Wrote the screens and the script (I have chapter 2 & 3). Here they are:

Scenes

1. when Alice grows
2. when the white rabbit went by Alice
3. pool of tears:(Alice crying)
4. when Alice shrinks
5. Alice swimming
6. when Alice meets the mouse
7. figuring out how to get dry mouse making dry speech
8. Alice thinking what’s a caucus race dodo explaining caucus race
9. running in circle
10. Alice handing out prizes and excepting the thimble
11. mouse telling the long tale
12. mouse angry at Alice
13. Alice crying

Script

A=Alice D=Dodo M=Mouse

A Cruiser and cruiser (thought bubble)

A If you please sir

A Crying (caption)

A How can I have done that it was a narrow escape. (thought bubble)

A I wish I had not cried so much (thought bubble)

A Ou est ma chatte? (speech bubble)

M William the concerer, whose cause was favored by the pope was soon submitted to by the English who wanted leaders and had been of late much accustomed to usurpation and conquest. Edwin and Morcar, the earls of Mercia and Northumbria-‘”

D “Why,” “the best way to explain it is to do it.”

D “The race is over!”

Who is going to hand out prizes?

D Why she of course.

So Alice handed out prizes to everyone.

M Fury said to a mouse, That he met in the house, ‘Let us both go to law: I will prosecute you. Come, I’ll take no denial; We must have a trial: For really doing this morning I’ve nothing to do.’ Said the mouse to the cur,’Such a trial, dear sir, With no jury or judge, would be tedious and dry. ‘I’ll be judge. ‘I’ll be jury, Said cunning old Fury: ‘I’ll try the whole cause: and condemn you to death.’”

A Crying

M Good by.

• Drew pictures. Here’s one one the second scene:

I’ll post another post soon!