Comments for c15sf

Comment on Dancing Emily by c15ai

Wed, 21 Mar 2007 14:00:21 +0000

That was great! But next time can you make it so there is more dancing than hurting each other? Like I said it was realy good. And next time try to put in more talking.

Comment on Dancing Emily by c15zb

Wed, 21 Mar 2007 13:57:01 +0000

I like your story but it could use alot more dialog and you need to show how the caricters are feeling but otherwise it is good.

Comment on Dancing Emily by c15am

Wed, 21 Mar 2007 13:51:36 +0000

I like how you made your story like the real cinderella but in your own way. It was a good idea that you told at the end of your story what happened to her when she grew up.

Comment on by Chris

Thu, 08 Mar 2007 16:01:39 +0000

It is interesting that you write of missing people more than some of the other poems. For me, I think I would miss my family the most- more than the place I live. I liked your poem.

Comment on New Orleans by Little Willow

Sat, 17 Feb 2007 23:07:50 +0000

How sweet!

Comment on New Orleans by Chris

Fri, 16 Feb 2007 16:28:59 +0000

Tell your buddy that she or he did a good job. From what you describe, I can only think that the New Orleans students must enjoy these exchanges as much as the Dalton students.

Comment on Letters From Rifka by Chris

Mon, 12 Feb 2007 16:11:21 +0000

I never thought how wonderful chocolate would be for someone who had never had it. It sounds like the book was a bit sad, but very good. Thanks for the review.

Comment on Letters From Rifka by edinger

Fri, 02 Feb 2007 21:06:11 +0000

It is indeed a very touching and moving book.

Comment on Letters From Rifka by c15zb

Mon, 29 Jan 2007 15:24:50 +0000

It is very touching I agree. From ZB

Comment on Letters From Rifka by c15am

Mon, 29 Jan 2007 15:22:18 +0000

I like how you described how much Rifka liked chocolate. I didn’t think of writing about that. But I should have because it also had a litetary part to it. Also your review was good because you also had facts like for example, someone with a contagious disease like ringworm would not be able to go to America.