Comments for c15af

Comment on The Football Cinderella by c15md

Wed, 21 Mar 2007 13:59:38 +0000

That was a great story c15al! Explode with laghter! Cool!

Comment on The Football Cinderella by c15bw

Wed, 21 Mar 2007 13:55:26 +0000

That was great sory I love football alot you know. You also thought of great names good job!

Comment on The Football Cinderella by c15lk

Wed, 21 Mar 2007 13:52:59 +0000

I know that you explained alot but it is sitll pretty confusing for somebody that does not know alot about foootball. The story was good though. Also, i’ve been reading alot of stories and where are you coming up with these names?????

Comment on by Chris

Thu, 08 Mar 2007 15:43:26 +0000

I think the jagged edges of the paper and harsh/contrasting colors reflect the violence of the experience in your poem. Nicely done.

Comment on My Third Grade Buddy And His Buddies by Sharon

Fri, 23 Feb 2007 17:25:04 +0000

That is a great thing that you buddy is doing

Comment on My Third Grade Buddy And His Buddies by Little Willow

Sat, 17 Feb 2007 22:50:22 +0000

Enjoy the yummy treats, and good luck with the fundraising.

Comment on My Third Grade Buddy And His Buddies by Chris

Fri, 16 Feb 2007 16:08:53 +0000

I have never been to New Orleans, but I like learning about it. Tell your buddy that she or he did a good job.

Comment on A Chinese Miner by Chris

Mon, 12 Feb 2007 15:08:39 +0000

I like the fact that you gave an example of the “great language”- it made it more clear for me.

Comment on A Chinese Miner by edinger

Fri, 02 Feb 2007 20:50:55 +0000

I took think you chose great examples from the book. I’m especially fond of ‘There will be no rest for their souls.’

Comment on Half a Sixpence by c15jg

Fri, 02 Feb 2007 14:58:35 +0000

hi again